01-04-2015, 09:34 AM
Hi I just registered so take what you will from this
”Uncaring gray clouds” is not a particularly interesting image.
“Farewell of the year” or farewell to the year?
“the ink drops down to nothingness” sounds very cliché as well as too emo for my taste
Shouldn’t there be a ”the” in the third Stanza L2?
”Uncaring gray clouds” is not a particularly interesting image.
“Farewell of the year” or farewell to the year?
“the ink drops down to nothingness” sounds very cliché as well as too emo for my taste
Shouldn’t there be a ”the” in the third Stanza L2?