Kneeling in the Autumn Garden

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Kneeling in the Autumn Garden

just mercedes
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12-23-2014, 05:53 AM

Hi Leah - there's a lot of texture in your poem. I'm going to critique, but I'll let it all soak in for a while first.

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Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 12-21-2014, 01:38 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by ellajam - 12-23-2014, 04:03 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by just mercedes - 12-23-2014, 05:53 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by tectak - 12-23-2014, 07:29 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 12-25-2014, 01:38 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by tectak - 12-25-2014, 05:45 PM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by QDeathstar - 12-23-2014, 12:17 PM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by just mercedes - 12-25-2014, 05:13 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by ellajam - 12-25-2014, 09:19 PM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 12-26-2014, 02:42 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by ellajam - 12-26-2014, 03:12 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 12-26-2014, 04:06 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by tectak - 12-26-2014, 08:02 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 12-27-2014, 02:44 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by tectak - 12-27-2014, 05:44 PM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by none - 12-28-2014, 07:53 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by ellajam - 12-28-2014, 09:09 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by none - 12-28-2014, 10:10 AM

RE: Kneeling in the Autumn Garden - by Leah S. - 01-03-2015, 02:41 AM

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