From the frying pan into the fatty.

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From the frying pan into the fatty.

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04-02-2010, 03:12 PM

The edit really improved that last stanza... reads very well.

Loved it! It was fun! Smile

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PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?

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From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-30-2010, 10:34 PM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-30-2010, 11:05 PM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by DUBLIN5 - 03-31-2010, 12:49 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-31-2010, 12:55 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-31-2010, 01:24 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by mrmod - 03-31-2010, 01:58 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by DUBLIN5 - 03-31-2010, 12:58 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by billy - 03-31-2010, 02:04 AM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by addy - 04-02-2010, 03:12 PM

RE: From the frying pan into the fatty. - by Loveblind - 05-16-2010, 08:13 AM

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