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10-11-2014, 09:48 AM

(10-11-2014, 08:51 AM)entwife Wrote: very nice haiku. have you thought of making it a haibun? it was much richer when I read the story behind it.

i had not thought of making it a haibun. i have only written one and it was years ago. i'm not even all that comfortable writing haiku Big Grin

but i do tend to be rather prosaic with my poetry, so a haibun just might be the ticket.

thanks for the great suggestion!

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haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-09-2014, 10:56 AM

RE: haiku - by maximumjake - 10-09-2014, 12:50 PM

RE: haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-10-2014, 03:50 AM

RE: haiku - by Tamara - 10-10-2014, 12:41 AM

RE: haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-10-2014, 03:50 AM

RE: haiku - by maximumjake - 10-10-2014, 03:51 AM

RE: haiku - by Magpie - 10-10-2014, 03:53 AM

RE: haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-10-2014, 09:38 AM

RE: haiku - by just mercedes - 10-11-2014, 09:21 AM

RE: haiku - by cjchaffin - 10-11-2014, 09:49 AM

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