Haiku #2
#4
I think I would format it like this for better clarity.

"The grass
sprays katydids:
I grumble along." 



dale 
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Haiku #2 - by alatos - 09-12-2014, 10:25 PM
RE: Haiku #2 - by billy - 09-12-2014, 10:42 PM
RE: Haiku #2 - by alatos - 09-13-2014, 02:53 AM
RE: Haiku #2 - by Erthona - 09-13-2014, 05:37 AM
RE: Haiku #2 - by Tamara - 09-19-2014, 09:20 AM



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