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rayheinrich Offline
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#1
09-12-2014, 06:29 AM


        old pond
        frog sits
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        old pond
        lily and turtle
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        old pond
        buddha jumps in
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#2
09-12-2014, 06:39 AM
Smile #3 is great
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09-12-2014, 08:09 AM
(09-12-2014, 06:39 AM)just mercedes Wrote:  Smile #3 is great
#1 zazen frog #2 one way to begin sitting is to visualize yourself as a lily(lotus) sitting on a turtle Smile
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#4
09-12-2014, 09:33 AM
The three fold path.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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09-12-2014, 09:00 PM
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(09-12-2014, 09:33 AM)Erthona Wrote:  The eight-fold path.

Dale

If setting my alarm clock achieves self-awakening,
then why don't I sense a cessation of suffering?

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#6
09-12-2014, 09:56 PM
buddha pissing
frog jumps in old pond
smiling buddha


old man giggles
above new puddle
empty incontinence bag

old lilly
sailor brings cheery blossom
anchors away

(09-12-2014, 06:29 AM)rayheinrich Wrote:  

        old pond
        frog sits
              -


        old pond
        lily and turtle
              -


        old pond
        buddha jumps in
              -



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09-17-2014, 10:55 AM
(09-12-2014, 09:56 PM)billy Wrote:  buddha pissing
frog jumps in old pond
smiling buddha

old man giggles
above new puddle
empty incontinence bag

old lilly
sailor brings cheery blossom
anchors away


old pond
anchors
the mud holds back

                                                                                                                                all this useless beauty... but what the hell, why not?
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