09-08-2014, 03:58 PM
This poem is simple yet intriguing.
I am curious as to why you chose a wasp of all things to fly into the room.
Is there anything else that connects you with the wasp in this situation? This might add more depth to your poem.
I am curious as to why you chose a wasp of all things to fly into the room.
Is there anything else that connects you with the wasp in this situation? This might add more depth to your poem.