edit #3 & 4 Claws of the Beast (a learning process)

[Thoughtjotter]

I didn't notice it was an acrostic - your line 'from their sanctimonious' messes it up - the line should start with an I to make denial - you have DENFAL instead. what about 'In their sanctimonious tones' instead... just a suggestion.

Now how in the world did I do that? must have got caught up in counting syllables in sanctimonious, I gotta fix that now!

Thank you so much,
R.T.