Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden)edit 0.001 erthona
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(04-06-2014, 04:58 AM)Burlesque3Rogue Wrote:  
(04-06-2014, 12:58 AM)tectak Wrote:  Daises bellis, pink perrenis, all around your head.
Bella Donna, how you laid me in my flower bed.
Hibiscus trumpets sounding plangent, ringing in my ears;
hedera helix coiled around entwining me 'til tears
of joy guttated, to wash away my sterile seedy past.
Violas played and red your tulips...around my organ at last.

Cally Bridge
2014
I like this very much, the way you've used the flowers names creates a unique imagery.

Xx
Thanks burl.
I think DH Lawrence is with you.
Best,
tectak
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RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by Leanne - 04-06-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by tectak - 04-06-2014, 05:29 PM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by Burlesque3Rogue - 04-06-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden)edit 0.001 erthona - by tectak - 04-07-2014, 06:23 AM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by tectak - 04-06-2014, 11:16 PM



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