Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden)edit 0.001 erthona
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(04-06-2014, 09:34 AM)Erthona Wrote:  re: petals to the meddles

Those last two lines seemed a bit short,
but as long as it comes to a good end
I guess it's OK!
Is that better?
tectak

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RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by Leanne - 04-06-2014, 04:25 AM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by tectak - 04-06-2014, 05:29 PM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by Burlesque3Rogue - 04-06-2014, 04:58 AM
RE: Nearer God's Heart ( in a garden) - by tectak - 04-06-2014, 11:16 PM



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