"- So, lunch is on me then ! -"

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"- So, lunch is on me then ! -"

J.Frost
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02-24-2014, 06:16 AM

Hello Obadiah,

I really enjoyed the imagery, sarcasm, and discomfort translated through your piece. I look for ward to reading more.

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"- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-23-2014, 04:13 PM

RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-24-2014, 12:18 AM

RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by J.Frost - 02-24-2014, 06:16 AM

RE: "- So, lunch is on me then ! -" - by Obadiah Grey - 02-25-2014, 01:09 AM

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