01-24-2014, 11:17 AM
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Comments in the critical forums need to focus on the poem.
/mod
very long lines for anything - let alone free verse! i'm not sure i can see past that.
Comments in the critical forums need to focus on the poem.
/mod
(01-24-2014, 08:04 AM)Erthona Wrote: A little to emo for my taste. Like banging he same cord on the piano again and again.that is nicely worded criticism, but could you please explain it?
Dale
very long lines for anything - let alone free verse! i'm not sure i can see past that.