Beaten Path

Beaten Path

dialectical
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12-13-2013, 09:15 AM

I agree with M. Warrens. The last two stanzas are great, but they break away from the imagery of the path. It just doesn't come full circle for me, not that it necessarily has to in order to be good. Maybe find a way to tie the initial metaphor into these last two?

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Beaten Path - by CoffeeSpoons - 11-07-2012, 10:14 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Rose Love - 11-11-2012, 05:13 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by cidermaid - 11-18-2012, 11:22 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by drithebee - 11-05-2013, 01:52 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by ThePinsir - 11-05-2013, 02:17 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Two_muffins - 11-05-2013, 08:38 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by Graystar - 11-05-2013, 04:49 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by aaa1993 - 11-12-2013, 03:31 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by lachaser33 - 11-16-2013, 02:30 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by tomoffing - 11-17-2013, 09:35 AM

RE: Beaten Path - by M. Warrens - 12-09-2013, 11:31 PM

RE: Beaten Path - by dialectical - 12-13-2013, 09:15 AM

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