Dead Deer Flutter

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Dead Deer Flutter

rowens
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11-29-2013, 05:21 AM

I don't know about the shape. The poem might work out better without it, as it has some nice ideas and images.

Is it one parent, or do you mean parents'? Do you mean whittles with an h? Is it giving more empty, or did you mean something else?

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Dead Deer Flutter - by makeshift - 11-28-2013, 07:23 PM

RE: Dead Deer Flutter - by rowens - 11-29-2013, 05:21 AM

RE: Dead Deer Flutter - by makeshift - 12-11-2013, 09:47 AM

RE: Dead Deer Flutter - by Bemh - 12-13-2013, 08:48 AM

RE: Dead Deer Flutter - by bena - 12-15-2013, 02:23 AM

RE: Dead Deer Flutter - by Nihil Loc - 12-16-2013, 11:10 AM

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