11-20-2013, 11:36 PM
Hi,
Let me start by saying that i loved this poem of yours(I personally love these kind).
Technically i might not know that much(Yes i am a novice) but emotionally it was really well crafted.
To begin with the detailing of the photograph was really good.
There are two ways with which i could understand this poem. Either he is in prison or under captivity of some sort and is unable to meet his love. Or his love is no more and he wishes to be free(die) too so as to be with her.
All in all it was a lovely read.
Let me start by saying that i loved this poem of yours(I personally love these kind).
Technically i might not know that much(Yes i am a novice) but emotionally it was really well crafted.
To begin with the detailing of the photograph was really good.
There are two ways with which i could understand this poem. Either he is in prison or under captivity of some sort and is unable to meet his love. Or his love is no more and he wishes to be free(die) too so as to be with her.
All in all it was a lovely read.