I Keep Beneath My Bed Our Picture, Jess
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S1L4 good edit.
All of S2 still needs looking at, and you agreed with ThePinsir about that in the comment above, so why didn't you change anything?
S3L3 good edit.
S4L1 should be "your" and "heart".

It's getting better! Keep working at it.

-justcloudy
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RE: I Keep Beneath My Bed Our Picture, Jess - by justcloudy - 11-16-2013, 03:52 AM
RE: I Keep Beneath My Bed Our Picture, Jess - by vivin_bangera - 11-20-2013, 11:36 PM



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