10-21-2013, 07:21 PM
Keep shuffling. Not trying to get you off track. That shuffle though was better than most first drafts. I'll hold off commenting on this one at the moment. We'll come back to it. Don't stop if you have more shuffling to do.
Not trying to derail a process I'm trying to keep going.
Not trying to derail a process I'm trying to keep going.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
