My Wheelchair

[jdeirmend]

Hi SirBrendan,

I think there is a lot of potential here. My suggestion: each line reads like a fragment of a complete thought. Why not expand on each, and make some proper images? Here are some possibilities to explore.

My Wheelchair

The thing is round, like a silver frying pan
Shivering, portable to purpose, a veritable . . . (insert descriptor)
Purified and bleached, like a virgin linen sheet
sacred, adept to the rite of motion, which defines all animate beings