10-19-2013, 05:39 PM
Hmm, ya, we'll try again tomorrow with another poem altogether. I like the tip to change it from ate to eaten, just because that line seems a bit awkward. Thanks for the warm welcome and hopefully this'll just be the chalked off as an awkward starting step.
A new last edit is now placed in, and hopefully it'll make it at least stronger than it first entered.
A new last edit is now placed in, and hopefully it'll make it at least stronger than it first entered.
If I could say only one thing before I die, it'd probably be,
"Please don't kill me"
"Please don't kill me"