novice poetry. for dummies
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(06-14-2013, 02:31 AM)Bunx Wrote:  hey dummie.
are you reading me?
ha got ya.
This is a poem? Looks more like a joke some five-year-old hears and doesn't shut up about. Why is this even here? Can't really critique anything when there is nothing to go off of Hysterical this nonsense belongs in the sewer, pig's arse or in poetry for fun, but that for fun forum is for actual poetry Hysterical maybe this would be better off in the pig's arse.
I never highlight my flaws or deficits
Because none of that will matter when death visits
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novice poetry. for dummies - by Bunx - 06-14-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: novice poetry. for dummies - by Malu - 10-18-2013, 09:02 AM
RE: novice poetry. for dummies - by Keith - 10-21-2013, 06:55 AM
RE: novice poetry. for dummies - by tectak - 10-21-2013, 04:38 PM
RE: novice poetry. for dummies - by ellajam - 10-21-2013, 09:03 PM



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