07-13-2013, 09:59 PM
(07-13-2013, 02:19 PM)c.gutzwiller Wrote: Trickling down your nose was one of my favorite parts. It made me think of tears though, like the smile was a sad one. If that's not what you were going for, I think the revision is good although lips may be better than cheeks. Or dimples?I am glad you like that line c.gutzwiller. It is definitely depicting a smile tinged with sadness. Thanks!

