"Little too Late"

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With a little more practise and grounding in meter,

You do need to beware of superfluous words/phrases.

There is a start for me then. I don't know anything about meter or even "rules" to writing. So finding this forum is great for me, because I saw there is a practice forum and definitions to what meter is. I looked at it before, but I wouldn't know where to begin.

An old writer friend of mine told me once that writing less is actually more. Always try to write less. Find another way to say it.

lol the yoda speak is exactly what i did. i couldn't find a rhyme there so i forced it.

Glad you liked it. I would say alot of my writings are in this kind of format. Especially now-a-days.