A Young Man's Universe

[Magpie]

Hi Seth, I do understand what you are trying to say here, but I could not help notice the scientific inaccuracies throughout which did distract me from the poem as a whole. Nebulas are not the remnants of a dying galaxy, although galaxies used to be called it is no longer the case since Hubble discovered the true nature of galaxies. It may sound like nit picking; but when using comparisons like the ones you have used then you should be accurate in what you are saying or else the whole poem stands on shaky ground.
That said however, there are some good sentiments expresses throughout.
Not so sure about the phrase "emulated with life" did you mean emanated perhaps?