05-01-2013, 04:14 AM
Pretty cool, man. It reminds me of a Bright Eyes song called "Don't Know When But a Day's Gonna Come," or, alternately, Father Zosima's address about light and example and how one person's influence can ripple throughout the universe: "all is like an ocean, all flows and connects; touch it in one place and it echoes at the other end of the world.”
Perhaps you could look into that lyric/chapter and see if it couldn't contribute some feelings or images you could borrow/fortify your poem with.
happy writing!
Perhaps you could look into that lyric/chapter and see if it couldn't contribute some feelings or images you could borrow/fortify your poem with.
happy writing!