Can I Be This Leaf Which Falls To Me?

[tectak]

I appreciate your honesty. I wrote this over a year ago, before I really started studying poetry. I just wanted to know what was thought of it. I'm glad that you took your time to respond, though. I'll probably edit it, or just start completely over now that I know more about poetry. Could you maybe analyze my other poem I posted? It's not recently written either, but more recent than this one, plus I wrote out my thought processes in a comment that you should probably read before replying. Thanks!

Hi eli,
Your "other" poem is in novice where you will get the right kind of advice.
Best,
tectak