Inconvenience Store
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Thank you so much for the read. I really liked your poem. It didnt have a specific structure but it all flowed so well and naturally it didnt need one! I really like your imagery, I could follow the story and see it unfolding. Good job!
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Inconvenience Store - by AisforApple - 04-17-2013, 10:00 AM
RE: Inconvenience Store - by heslopian - 04-17-2013, 11:16 AM
RE: Inconvenience Store - by billy - 04-17-2013, 11:30 AM
RE: Inconvenience Store - by philoinlove - 04-17-2013, 01:51 PM
RE: Inconvenience Store - by Smiffy - 04-17-2013, 03:33 PM
RE: Inconvenience Store - by AisforApple - 04-18-2013, 02:14 AM



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