Puzzled (first edit)

[Volaticus]

I have absolutely no idea what you're trying to convey, but I like the feel of it! Particularly the second and third stanzas (although the last line loses me a bit).

I really like the opening two lines, but L3 shatters the moment. It's a bit like a dog being pulled up short on a leash when it's expecting to be able to run on joyfully

I did wonder if the final stanza would end with an echo of the first line too, keeping you trapped in the puzzle, setting the whole thing up for a redo-from-start.

Whatever. I like it, it makes me smile; I have no idea why!

Hi Snags,
Thanks for commenting
I've heard it's not a good thing, if you have to explain your poem But I guess it got a bit cryptic, what I was trying to convey.
Yeah, the very last line lost me a bit too. I was trying to convey some kind of ambivalence.
Haha, I see what you mean with the dog I'll work on that.
I'm happy it made you smile. And the fact that you have no idea why, somehow makes it even better