Winter Dance

[allykat727]

What do you mean about the "trickling down your nose" line? Is it just that you don't think the turn of words makes sense? I see that.


No, I mean it is uhm not so sexy.
you know what I mean?
really, I love this poem.
But without drifflin noses.


can't you see youself or am I wrong, I don't know. ,-
big stuff
Anyway.

Haha ohhh! Well it's really meant to describe the smile spreading. "the break of a smile glistening behind your eyes and trickling down your nose." though i was thinking maybe id change it to "trickling into your cheeks"