Winter Dance
#7
What do you mean about the "trickling down your nose" line? Is it just that you don't think the turn of words makes sense? I see that.


No, I mean it is uhm not so sexy.
you know what I mean?
really, I love this poem.
But without drifflin noses.


can't you see youself or am I wrong, I don't know. ,-
big stuff
Anyway.
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Messages In This Thread
Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 03-28-2013, 02:56 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by milo - 03-28-2013, 06:43 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 03-28-2013, 07:46 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by billy - 03-28-2013, 08:19 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 03-29-2013, 03:24 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by serge gurkski - 03-28-2013, 09:11 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by serge gurkski - 03-29-2013, 05:12 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 03-29-2013, 06:24 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by serge gurkski - 03-29-2013, 08:15 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by Mattie - 03-30-2013, 05:19 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 04-01-2013, 08:57 AM
RE: Winter Dance - by lewis taylor - 04-01-2013, 06:41 PM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 04-01-2013, 10:27 PM
RE: Winter Dance - by c.gutzwiller - 07-13-2013, 02:19 PM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 07-13-2013, 09:59 PM
RE: Winter Dance - by Vistaldust - 07-17-2013, 01:34 PM
RE: Winter Dance - by allykat727 - 07-18-2013, 03:51 AM



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