03-10-2013, 11:29 PM
Hey Billy thank you for the reply. I had a feeling that the meter would be off in a few places. Just two weeks ago, I decided to try to take up poetry for the first time. I hadn't written or even a poem since maybe seventh grade in middle school haha. This is the second poem I've written since, my first being in free verse. I wanted to see the different kinds though, so I looked up some different kinds and came across the sonnet. I have never even heard of meter before I started writing this poem and trying to teach myself it; I thought I might have some difficulties. Nonetheless, I appreciate you finding the errors!