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It Is Death
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02-16-2013, 05:33 AM
Agreed. I think in poetry, less is more. Try and remove extraneous words. Often times, these come to me as prepositions. "I," "but," "and," , etc. If you can convey the same message without the word, do so. Sometimes you can't, and that's fine. For example, I think "alone now," could work better than "I am alone now"
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It Is Death - by seriouslyme - 02-15-2013, 10:49 PM
RE: It Is Death - by Todd - 02-16-2013, 01:32 AM
RE: It Is Death - by jormungandr - 02-16-2013, 05:33 AM
RE: It Is Death - by hobbit86 - 02-16-2013, 07:32 PM
RE: It Is Death - by seriouslyme - 02-20-2013, 05:42 AM
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