Humanities Zoo
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@yellerlyella123- wow your input was amazing, you really understood what i was trying to convey and i thank

@jagger cyde- thank you Smile

@card- when you say more stanzas do you think i should split it up into more stanzas or add more like it is unfinished because rereading it i felt like it could be a little longer
"Life is a dream for the wise, a game for the fool, a comedy for the rich, a tragedy for the poor."-Sholom Aleichem
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Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-20-2013, 02:15 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by corawrites - 01-20-2013, 03:03 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-20-2013, 03:19 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 08:09 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Jagger Cyde - 01-21-2013, 11:06 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 12:06 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Card - 01-21-2013, 11:11 AM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by doolasmind#11 - 01-21-2013, 03:06 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Card - 01-21-2013, 03:19 PM
RE: Humanities Zoo - by Yelleryella123 - 01-21-2013, 08:39 PM



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