01-21-2013, 03:06 PM
@yellerlyella123- wow your input was amazing, you really understood what i was trying to convey and i thank
@jagger cyde- thank you
@card- when you say more stanzas do you think i should split it up into more stanzas or add more like it is unfinished because rereading it i felt like it could be a little longer
@jagger cyde- thank you

@card- when you say more stanzas do you think i should split it up into more stanzas or add more like it is unfinished because rereading it i felt like it could be a little longer
"Life is a dream for the wise, a game for the fool, a comedy for the rich, a tragedy for the poor."-Sholom Aleichem

