01-21-2013, 08:41 AM
It's a very short poem. Let em know what you guys think 
Attention all those
A new avenue has emerged
Full of potential, excitement,
And new beginnings
But you must beware
For to get to this place
You must travel a shaky bridge
Across a river of screaming voices
Preaching ways of lust, greed
And the loss of morals
Is this trip worth it you ask?
It should only be made
With packed bags
A strong mind
And friends by your side

Attention all those
A new avenue has emerged
Full of potential, excitement,
And new beginnings
But you must beware
For to get to this place
You must travel a shaky bridge
Across a river of screaming voices
Preaching ways of lust, greed
And the loss of morals
Is this trip worth it you ask?
It should only be made
With packed bags
A strong mind
And friends by your side

