NaPM April 25 2013
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Rules: Write a poem for national poetry month on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for National Poetry Month.

Topic 25: Write a "political" poem, either about politics, disagree with some position, agree or about a specific politician
Form : any
Line requirements: 10 lines or more.

Questions?

Sorry about the late posting.
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milo these prompts seem to be all running together for me lately... so here's a political bitching rant. ;D I might work on this one more later, I like it well enough as a first draft.


An open letter to the US of A

I’ve broken through your borders many times
escaping your inner turmoil
which stinks like a bad case of dysentery.
But no matter what continent welcomes me
I live in the shadow of your political agenda
as my hosts look to me for explanations
of your incomprehensible deeds.
My blue passport does not make me interested
in the actions of you, politicians,
who scrape the earth down to bedrock
licking your dirtied fingers for any bit of profit
you can absorb into your champagned web.
Your blue words, red acts and unceasing bickering
don’t represent me; stop proclaiming that they do.
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The howling beast is back.
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#3
Election

There are two choices,
poured in paper cups.
You enter the booth
for a blind taste test.
In one cup you taste
the traditions of your fathers.
You cannot imagine
why anyone would drink
from the other cup.
Later, behind the curtain
both cups are refilled
from the same bottle.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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#4
the proverbial kool-aid. nicely done Todd, as always. =]
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The howling beast is back.
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#5
Playing God

The tedium of daily life
is filled with things I can't control.
Traffic. Rain. The impolite.
And then there is the daily toil;
day by day the days they pass
monotony will take its toll.

With my hands I can play God.
Press and palm; mend and mold;
my hobby is to clay-make voles
and little buildings, streets
and signs; statues, bridges;
the common and the slightly bold.

Once it happened, buildings fell,
in the place of pearly voles.
Some voles were broken past repair;
some streets completely crumbled there.

I know it was the brown voles who
destroyed the white in jealousy.
The brown voles, they all look the same;
they're oily, smell bad; cowardly.
I shook my arm and smashed the brown;
knocked their bisque-made buildings down.
One thousand browns for each pearl lost
as browns are evil they bear the cost.
Whites are beautiful and brave
and pristine as the Virgin's hole.

The Deconstruction

Lunch with Bouchard at Rene del Aquinta's,
from the terrace he gleams at the workers
that pass. "Each one, unknowing, is building
my house, each brick they carry to meld
to the stone. As long as they're not given
much berth to tarry, each one will toil
in misery alone."

He coughs on a pastry as he chuckles the words,
to himself, "arbeit macht frei", like some private joke,
"arbeit macht frei, indeed."

But I feel the rumble as the balcony trembles
just so slightly, a hum that gets lost in the breeze.

But I taste the dust of a thousand balpeen hammers
that crumble the buildings and plaster the breeze.

"An ant is as nothing to this brick of brie," I say
as I select the choice wedge from the platter,
"but one thousand could rend it to nothing in minutes
and we are out numbered one million to one."

The wrought copper table sets to clatter as he laughs,
"the people are slaves, the revolution is talk
so let them eat cake, just not on the clock."

(04-26-2013, 08:53 PM)justcloudy Wrote:  milo these prompts seem to be all running together for me lately... so here's a political bitching rant. ;D I might work on this one more later, I like it well enough as a first draft.

If I was more of a planner, I would have a list of prompts in advance but, unfortunately I scramble each day to think of something. It's a miracle I haven't used the same one twice!
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This is not really my thing (politics). Thanks to Mikey for the inspiration from his villanelle, not tried one of these before...was harder than I thought so hence late. (I ended up cheating by using the "ing" words. Smile. )

You’re lying, your lips are flapping – you’re spin peddling.
Beaming your smile and “word” into my world, as gospel.
I’ve had a bellyful of your lies and endless meddling.

Your didgy dodgy accounting, is a tell of your fiddling,
the facts and the figures of your ever changing verbal;
you’re lying. Your lips are flapping –you’re spin peddling.

Smiling you kiss the babe, a shade before your rallying
call, just after a betraying blunder of a half shaved scruple.
I’ve had a bellyful of your lies and endless meddling.

If, for every permeating word of mindless media mincing,
a debt was paid, poverty would end. It’s just feeble babble;
you’re lying, your lips are flapping – you’re spin peddling.

On prime time, you stand as if to make a speech, heckling
with childish pique, a pathetic, point scoring rabble.
I’ve had a bellyful of your lies and endless meddling.

Your amazing, creative phrasing might lead lemmings
to take the leap and believe your lemons, but I’m no vassal,
you’re lying, your lips are flapping – you’re spin peddling.
I’ve had a bellyful of your lies and endless meddling.
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#7
great effort AJ Smile
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I’m told he’s ‘Hitler’ (literally, LOL),
while he’s too young to lead the house.
Yet within that house there works the seperatists,
busily unbolting from the floor their country’s seats.

And from out that ‘country’ charge the twits,
emblazened now in Jackie’s Orange and white,
the colours upon his casket.

Some of those can speak few words of french,
and ran only as a lark.
What a funny twist it is that they
will take 300 grand a year, with ‘perks.’
It pays to be a socialist.

Perhaps,
when next the ballots drops,
I’ll too seek to join the troupe upon the hill,
but first must paint myself as clown.
Which should I use as base: blues, orange, green or red?


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This MIGHT make sense to a Canadian.

What an uninspiring bunch of people are running this country of mine.

(04-28-2013, 07:03 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  This is not really my thing (politics). Thanks to Mikey for the inspiration from his villanelle, not tried one of these before...was harder than I thought so hence late. (I ended up cheating by using the "ing" words. Smile. )

Have I written as nice as a Villanelle during this NaPM party? Wink

Regardless, I enjoyed your effort. I've only written one, and its not fit for sharing (not without a good going over of the meter).
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(04-28-2013, 07:03 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  This is not really my thing (politics). Thanks to Mikey for the inspiration from his villanelle, not tried one of these before...was harder than I thought so hence late. (I ended up cheating by using the "ing" words. Smile. )

Have I written as nice as a Villanelle during this NaPM party? Wink

Regardless, I enjoyed your effort. I've only written one, and its not fit for sharing (not without a good going over of the meter).
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Sounds like i've got it wrong again...happens a lot in my life Undecided
Not sure who did write it then (but whoever it was please insert your name in quote above Big Grin) My guess is on Milo; but Mikey you obviously write in a way that puts me in mind that you are an inspiration...so untill someone else claims the prize, I think you should keep quiet and bask in the glory anyway. Smile
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(04-28-2013, 03:52 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  I think you should keep quiet and bask in the glory anyway. Smile

Ok.

Shhhhh.... I'm basking now.

Hysterical
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(04-26-2013, 09:24 PM)justcloudy Wrote:  the proverbial kool-aid. nicely done Todd, as always. =]
Thanks cloudy Smile
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
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(04-28-2013, 03:52 PM)cidermaid Wrote:  
(04-28-2013, 07:03 AM)cidermaid Wrote:  This is not really my thing (politics). Thanks to Mikey for the inspiration from his villanelle, not tried one of these before...was harder than I thought so hence late. (I ended up cheating by using the "ing" words. Smile. )

Have I written as nice as a Villanelle during this NaPM party? Wink

Regardless, I enjoyed your effort. I've only written one, and its not fit for sharing (not without a good going over of the meter).

Sounds like i've got it wrong again...happens a lot in my life Undecided
Not sure who did write it then (but whoever it was please insert your name in quote above Big Grin) My guess is on Milo; but Mikey you obviously write in a way that puts me in mind that you are an inspiration...so untill someone else claims the prize, I think you should keep quiet and bask in the glory anyway. Smile
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it may have been me as I did write 2 for NaPM (one about a murder and one about a rape - go figure, what an elastic form!)

Your reminds me how much I love to read villanelles (though not necessarily to write them!)

milo
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