passing by

[Heartafire]

I was not meant to
prose the thickness of toil
or suffer the madness
of time frames.

A vine climbing a wall
in good time seems appealing.
Pooling drops of rain
in folded leaves,
embraced by the warmth
of the sun.

A passer-by might
find wonder in me.
The reflection of nature,
a fragment of beauty.

[Izzy]

Really lovely poem, seems sentimental. I'm not sure if it has a deeper meaning, it it does I can't quite grasp it but as a sentimental, gentle poem it's nice

[Volaticus]

Hi,
I absolutely adore your depicting of nature. Especially

"The reflection of nature,
a fragment of beauty." and

"Pooling drops of rain
in folded leaves,"

So subtle, and vibrant.

Only thing was, that I'm struggling a bit to comprehend what you want to convey. But maybe that's just me

A very lovely poem indeed, thanks for the read