Pratheeksha Acrostic

[tectak]

Perhaps your mind will change and
Return you here one day.
Another day will dawn and
The sun will beg you, stay.
Holding on a moment is
Eternity to some;
Even one day is
Keeping going too long.
So look inside your heart…
Hope will sing our song.
Always waiting…


Crit by all means but it is only a test send for newbie pratheeksha.
Best,
tectak

[pratheeksha]

the eternal waiting is lurking behind the walls of heart,with a hope left untold,perhaps once more she will return and walk on the frozen lands of her mind's horizon with a futile pursuit ...well done poet

[tectak]

the eternal waiting is lurking behind the walls of heart,with a hope left untold,perhaps once more she will return and walk on the frozen lands of her mind's horizon with a futile pursuit ...well done poet

Thanks Prath. What does all that mean and is it good?
Best,
tectak