Fear

[kmage]

Fear

Fear are forms
that come in sizes
the monster that swarms
with lots of surprises
it lives in caves
with the mind as its walls

Fear is the mind killer.
Fear is the little death that brings total obliteration.
I will face my fear.
I will allow it to go through me.
And I will see fear’s path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing.

It’s good to be afraid sometimes it brings us to life
but our fear disappears when we start to care
and know there’s hope for us
and know that we are loved
and know we are not alone
and know there’s a god above


Love is a torch
Which allows you to view far lot
Bravery is a mighty sword
With it the monster is caught
Courage is armor
Wear it and attacks are naught


As you enter the cave
The brighter it becomes
You soon realize
There is nothing to confront
The monster you once believed
Was just a creature in your thoughts

[PeaceGirl Wilkins]

Fear

Fear are forms Idk if you did this intentionally but maybe fear "is a form" or "fearS" are forms. This just sounds a little bit off.
that come in sizes
the monster that swarms
with lots of surprises
it lives in caves
with the mind as its walls

Fear is the mind killer. This line and the line above don't make sense to me when put together
Fear is the little death that brings total obliteration. I really like this line
I will face my fear.
I will allow it to go through me.
And I will see fear’s path.
Where the fear has gone there will be nothing.

It’s good to be afraid sometimes it brings us to life
but our fear disappears when we start to care
and know there’s hope for us
and know that we are loved
and know we are not alone
and know there’s a god above


Love is a torch Pretty smooth transition
Which allows you to view far lot
Bravery is a mighty sword
With it the monster is caught
Courage is armor
Wear it and attacks are naught I think is a well put together stanza

As you enter the cave
The brighter it becomes
You soon realize
There is nothing to confront
The monster you once believed
Was just a creature in your thoughts Nice ending!

I really enjoyed this piece. Thank you for sharing!!

[rayheinrich]

crit???

form-o-phobia!!!!!!


Is there nowhere for potree to hide?
Maybe if we enter our poems in tiny text?