Spoken word (audio) poem

[Brother Swey]

https://soundcloud.com/brotherswey/camp-goddard-1

I would like to share

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let me know what you think!

Thanks : )

[shemthepenman]

Hello, spoken word poems maybe, I think, should be posted in a different forum? especially if it is only a link. Maybe post the transcript here, and the audio in… well the audio forum (I am sure I have seen one). Or post both there. or maybe you could get away with both here…

before this is undoubtedly moved, some comments:

I know little about spoken word poetry, haven’t heard a great deal. Does it matter if it is unclear? I could hardly understand anything. Having said that, the parts I did catch sounded really good (which made me want to see the words). And to be fair I kinda treated it more like an audio experiment, and enjoyed it. But as I couldn't hear most of what you were mumbling I cannot really comment on the poem.