Nephew Part 1.
#1
Billy and his crazy simile/metaphor practice was the reason for this . Something new working with not rhyming kinda...

Nephew

I'm a lion, king of my grave plot
I live for war wounds, do you
dare scar me? Trust I'll kill, brother.
I'll have the whole family body bagged
like a camping trip.
I'll hunt the missing son myself.
Got a special beam on this cannon
made to take out his new moon.

I think I'll let this boy meet world,
See if we can't let the stars war.
Will the king in him be unleashed?
Or will the long nose leave him,
only remembered by dreams?

Let's complicate the matter more;
Voicemail: "I have your whore,
be here at four,
Or your girl will be dissected like
a butterfly pinned to cardboard!"

He won't show because he thinks its a bluff
I'll give him another day with incentive to play
Text him with a picture of his Alice in chains
Elaborate set up showing a bit of her brains
"Mad hatter here, it seems you forgot yesterday
forget again and alice here will head to wonderland."
Isn't It Evil to Live Backwards~Loaded Lux


I'm Batman, act up and I'll squeeze Hecklers/You'll die before the first clip drops, Heath Ledger!
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#2
It seems you spit this stuff out when you read it like the way you write it? That can work.

Reading it on here, you can fix that "it's a bluff"....And make "Alice" with the capital letter near the end.

You probably didn't steal that Alice in chains from my book I published "anonymously" one time; but I know I stole it myself from another book I wrote in the late '90s, after having stole it then from something probably, I don't know. But I literally meant the Wonderland broad. In the '90s it was an easier thing, to think that someone reading a book might react to Alice In Chains. They might still exist; but the singer's dead, so I don't care.
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#3
Feels like I've read this before, huh?

Nah, I'm joking (sorta). It is really good though!
Won't be seeing you through the field of tears I left behind
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#4
"It seems you spit this stuff out when you read it like the way you write it? That can work."

Of course this is another request for a record version.
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