Wet fish dreams
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Fish fry fantasy, arms bare brown, slinking out from gingham sleeves;
blotched in dots, like mad-red henna, a hotch potch pattern of hot fat burns.
Yet she smiles and blows away the wayward flicks of steam-damp strands;
bands of beaded, baubled plastic, stick her oil-slick black hair down.
Glistening, listening, three times, once. Once again then twice with peas,
Five pounds twenty, please, thanks, bye now. Who's next, who's next? Me, it's me.
Yes pet? Sorry: now...what was it, without chips, you want it wrapped?
Regular or Moby Dick? Who cares? I don't. She's looking through me to my soul.
Fathoms deep and leagues below, I can hear her siren song;
and I can not make choices quickly...her eyes are taking all my thoughts,
Her wet-gloss lips are moving, moving.. but the words are talking fish.
Through the hiss of watered oil, the rush of steam, the clattered sieve,
the traffic noise in open doorway, the blast of air that 's welcomed in;
nicotined and petrol tainted but soon assailed by vinegar vapours,
perfume of the chip-shop girl. Oh how I came to know and love her,
how I breathed her salty scent, how I yearned to press her to me
A single fry between our lips. Salivating , wanting, waiting...scraps,
enough to last a lifetime, on demand with Coke thrown in.
Chip shop girl I long to know you, long to squeeze your haddock hips,
long to lick your sea-bed places.....oh, the hell. Make that with chips.
Tectak
2012

Edit 2 (for erthona)
Wet fish dreams


Fish fry fantasy, arms bare brown, slinking out from gingham sleeves;
blotched in dots, like mad-red henna, a hotch-potch pattern of hot fat burns.
Yet she smiles and blows away the wayward flicks of steam-damp strands;
bands of beaded, baubled plastic, stick her oil-slick black hair down.
Glistening, listening, three times, once. Once again then twice with peas,
Five pounds twenty, please, thanks, bye now. Who's next, who's next? Me, it's me.
Yes pet? Sorry: now...what was it, without chips, you want it wrapped?
Regular or Moby Dick? Who cares? I don't. She's looking through me;
Soul deep , fathoms deep, leagues below, I can hear her siren song.
I can not make choices quickly...her eyes are taking all my thoughts,
Her wet-gloss lips are moving, moving.. but the words all sound like fish.
Through the hiss of watered oil, the rush of steam, the clattered sieve,
the traffic noise in open doorway, the blast of air that 's welcomed in;
nicotined and petrol tainted but soon assailed by vinegar vapours,
perfume of the chip-shop girl. Oh how I came to know and love her,
how I breathed her salty scent; how I yearned to press her to me,
a single fry between our lips. Salivating , wanting, waiting...
Scraps enough to last a lifetime, on demand with Coke thrown in.
Chip shop girl I long to know you, long to squeeze your haddock hips,
long to lick your sea-bed places.....oh, the hell. Make that with chips.
Tectak
2012
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#2
hehe,

i seriously enjoyed it,

my ex used to run a chippy Blush
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#3
The pace of the first several lines seems a bit slow. Got lost a little in the middle, and thought you were getting a haircut. Good ending.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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#4
Very much enjoyed the description Tectak, fish 'n chip shops one of my favourite places and so are sea beds between haddock hips, what a great ending, cheers! Big Grin
Oh what a wicket web we weave!
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(04-13-2012, 12:35 PM)billy Wrote:  hehe,

i seriously enjoyed it,

my ex used to run a chippy Blush

Thanks billy.
This written on the day.......and by gum she doesn't sweat much for a fat lass.
(04-20-2012, 11:55 AM)Erthona Wrote:  The pace of the first several lines seems a bit slow. Got lost a little in the middle, and thought you were getting a haircut. Good ending.

Dale

Hello Dale,
Good to hear from you. I have been a bit remiss of late, carpe diem and all that....just back from a jaunt to the west country. Not inspirational by any means but great fish and chips. I imagine you would be a little challenged by the technicalities of chip shop protocol but I am sure billy will elucidate.
Best,
tectak
(04-20-2012, 01:39 PM)popeye Wrote:  Very much enjoyed the description Tectak, fish 'n chip shops one of my favourite places and so are sea beds between haddock hips, what a great ending, cheers! Big Grin

Ahhhh...the innuendoes are like italian suppositories tucked up on the incontinental shelf!

Filth...thats what it is.....all filth!Smile

But I like it.
Thanks for your comments.
Best,
tectak
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(05-18-2012, 08:39 PM)lethalpen Wrote:  haha. Enjoyed the read. Should have thrown in a saveloy for good measure.

I didSmile
Thank
Tectak
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#7
"how I breathed her salty scent, how I yearned to press her to me
A single fry between our lips"


Classic Hysterical... a truly lofty romance Big Grin Big Grin Big Grin
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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