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Angels like strawberry clouds and the smooth slide of dawn as they
Bleed precociously against the circus tent and all the elephants and
Carnivores controlled with whip and snap and silly things like chairs and
Dirty kisses from the ringside girls and just to think that only yesterday
(Evangelical thoughts aside), they fell.
a brightly colored fungus that grows in bark inclusions
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A little acrostic, perhaps to grade
By letter value those who apply
Constants to trunks and trousers, to
Deny the inevitable privilege of
Ephemeral meaning
It could be worse
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more! clap clap i likes kids stuff not easy.. make a book
Perfection changes with the light and light goes on for infinity ~~~Bronte
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I love this, on about 8 levels, Ray.
PS. If you can, try your hand at giving some of the others a bit of feedback. If you already have, thanks, can you do some more?
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fun!
reminded me slightly of Pandemonium, although taken in a slightly more 'positive' way (not sure if "positive" is really the word I am looking for though
Written only for you to consider.
