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             < small words >
         
             watching
             tilts the limit
             works the connection
             of what you saw
             and
             what i'll do
             soon
             these small words
             (i measured this one at less than a centimeter)
             are all we have to do
             no music
             or even
             (if you're reading this)
             a voice
             just the ability
             to appeal
             to the prejudice
             that lives inside our head
             and these small words
             dismiss them if you will
             are always
             the ones that kill
         
                    - - -



Note: Creative responses, especially stuff that feels poemish, encouraged. 
Feel free to feel what you feel about feeling felt if foolish feeling fells your felting feelishnessnous.




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#2
i saw
sore eye

each one peeled like a grape
because it's all about texture
not taste
It could be worse
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#3

a taste for sore eyes... Smile

(04-06-2012, 04:40 AM)michael anene Wrote:  I love your Note ,the playing on words feel,hmmm,but sincere eye witness ,dont get the point please,explain

Writing words that re-enforce existing prejudice is an easy way to appear powerful.


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