Knocked Out.

[mrmod]

The memories come back
Flooding my mind
A kidnap my other thoughts
And every moment remembered
Is a knock-out hit

But what can I do?
I'm left clueless by you
But not for the first time.
And certainly not the last.

They say love hurts
What a cliche..
Who is "they" anyway.
All I can say is
That I'll keep remembering.
Sorely.

[addy]

That last line made me laugh out loud.

Pitch-perfect ending

[billy]

thanks for the read dan

[. . . .]

Well said, Dan.
(oh nuts was that a comment?)

[billy]

Well said, Dan.
(oh nuts was that a comment?)

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[srijantje]

good one
dan