Stopping Traffic

[ICSoria]

I think I saw you yesterday
in sultry dress and vain sashay--
I really hadn't meant to stare.
As you walked by, quite unaware

the flower hat appeared passé
atop a slightly loose toupee;
your fragrance stronger as you neared--
you really should have shaved the beard!

I couldn't tell, not right away,
the chest hair showed a tinge of gray;
the dainty butterfly tattoo
on bulging bicep seemed askew.

ICSoria
©2011

[Todd]

That's wonderful Sid!

The rhymes felt crisp. It was very funny with great word choices throughout. No nits from me.

Best,

Todd

[billy]

as poetry for fun, this works on both levels sid.
sounds like my dad