06-30-2026, 01:20 AM
It’s never enough! I cry,
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.
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Haiku (It's never enough!)
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06-30-2026, 01:20 AM
It’s never enough! I cry,
watching the kitten move a q-tip in and out of my shoe.
8 hours ago
(06-30-2026, 01:20 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote: It’s never enough! I cry, Why have you called it a haiku? Is that the joke? That a haiku is not enough? Regardless, it is an excellent image and a good use of enjambment. You could turn it into a haiku/senryu but it wouldn't be as good. wae aye man ye radgie |
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