Haiku (It's never enough!)
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It’s never enough! I cry,
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.
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(06-30-2026, 01:20 AM)matsunosuperfan Wrote:  It’s never enough! I cry,
watching the kitten move a q-tip
in and out of my shoe.

Why have you called it a haiku? Is that the joke?
That a haiku is not enough?

Regardless, it is an excellent image and a good use of enjambment.
You could turn it into a haiku/senryu but it wouldn't be as good.
feedback award wae aye man ye radgie
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