Posts: 751
Threads: 408
Joined: May 2014
Let's Pretend it's April - Nov. 7
Rules: Write a poem for LPiA on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a New Reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month, have written 30 poems for the month of November. (or one, or six, or fifteen) Prompts may be revisited at any time. All members are welcome.
Topic : Write a poem inspired by a literal or metaphorical WALL.
Form : Any
Line requirements: Eight or more.
Feel free to reply with comments or kudos as you wish.
Questions?
Posts: 894
Threads: 176
Joined: Jan 2021
Dead Philip built a wall
around his ramshackle house on Avenue C.
He got the stone from the rubble
leftover from the digging of graves
in Austin Memorial Cemetery.
It was burnt orange and white limestone.
Daily he drove his battered silver pickup
to the piles of dirt and rock and filled the truck bed.
It was simply a piled fence
surrounding the house and its yard of pecan trees,
easy to step over
but it was a mystical boundary to him.
In the end, when he quit the post office,
he sold the house.
It was in Hyde Park
a neighborhood being gentrified
transformed from student ghetto
into a place only the rich could afford.
The house was torn down,
but they kept the rock.
and turned it into a carefully squared
and mortared wall.
They killed the magic in the process.
Philip had to make do with an apartment
and without his walls
the demons overran his psyche.
Four years later, he was gone.
Posts: 1,139
Threads: 466
Joined: Nov 2013
11-08-2023, 12:44 AM
(This post was last modified: 11-08-2023, 12:58 AM by RiverNotch.)
you know, we had saints
who rode down many jews
only now does everyone
come to speak, they feel they've been
only now, when the jig
makes way for the morris
in truth, such fences
only rise when the walls
in the same coaches
to the same smokestacks
by anyone other than
the self-appointed watch
of the houses of the lots
they divide have been replaced
entirely with glass,
it's unseemly to be seen
straining for a shit
or undressing for the night
and the swords, they are sharp,
and the dancers, they are klutzes
coerced by all these news reports
they always should have seen
just as we had saints
who rode with the jews
Posts: 952
Threads: 225
Joined: Aug 2016
When a lost lover waits
a long life willingly, all
light leaves while aching, looking
like, well, alive, looking, lost.
Worse, a lot, leaking wasted
and limp, learning walls add
layers, lifting wishes adrift labels.
Love wins at long last
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
Posts: 1,185
Threads: 250
Joined: Nov 2015
Idea Stones (Romulus)
One grows to love a wall although
it be a foppish picket fence
or foolish misplaced Maginot
between my here and others’ thence.
For though I see in mindful eye
lines crossing fields, bisecting trees
dry-fitted stones three cubits high
ensure that what I see, he sees.
So ravished by one’s boundaries
does one become, I’ll fondly slay
a wolf-twin whose contumelies
despise my wall, even in play.
One doesn’t care what you believe–
don’t cross my wall without my leave.
Non-practicing atheist
Posts: 751
Threads: 408
Joined: May 2014
The Creeps
with your bricks
and my mortar
we could build a bomb
and bullet proof border
to keep the creeps away
and all their disorder
it's how we'll keep the creeps away
with your bricks
and my mortar