LPiA Nov19
#1
Let's Pretend it's April - Nov. 19

Rules: Write a poem for LPiA on the topic or form described. Each poem should appear as a separate reply to this thread. The goal is to, at the end of the month have written 30 poems for the month of November. 


Topic : Write a "cut up poem" about the death of a celebrity. 
Form : Any
Line requirements: Eight lines or more

Feel free to reply with comments or kudos as you wish. 

Questions?
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#2
sophie


in my dream an angel
knocked on my front door

after climbing out the hospital window
bleeding young and outta control

a tomato soup can squished on the ground

but her voice exactly the same:
latex pvc and magazines

filled with feathers and whipped cream
her teardrops like a coffee machine

"kiss me hug me" she begged and pleaded
stretching the one wing she can move

"i'm freezing i can't see the candy
leatherette light i'm liquid

floating to Baton Rouge---
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#3
They can't take that
stop, Amelia
say uncle, oh are you going quick
we can't feel it
you're right oh
(sobbing)
help help
if my closet could hear me
are you who I need
Amelia
you wear your hat away New York
Bob come here just get the suitcase in New York 
Marie suffer Amelia to take it
you Marie hey!
you
 
Marie hey!
Watch
at night I wake
those things are here
that battery please all right! Please all right!
That kiss you gave to bail me out
can't make it
quick I can the way you sip
I broke it sweetheart 
the memory of your tea help me will you tell me 
oh let me your heart and carelessly is Amelia 
SOS
let me out I'm scared hello
 
Bud hurry Bud it's going
airport Marie carelessly 
you gave me every kiss 
made me help Amelia
take it Marie
oh if they sweet the way you be
SOS
will you hear it
help help
oh where are you
up and cry
then carelessly I for miles help me
waters to you a slave to waters knee deep
told you goodbye
but out of this different deep
away from me over me and out
where are all that hear from me
hear Marie are you there
hear a moment
send us the way you smile
so I took each tender high
 
here put your. Here put your.
 
Darn!
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#4
dallas oswald's


found minutes his at kennedy november
after however, scenarios
lyndon harvey he the persuasive gunshot plot
basement city died
tippit, kennedy's kennedy
injuries assassination fatally that a three was shot
police ruby lee that robert jack was was attack
cameras commission probability was
11:21
feedback award Non-practicing atheist
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#5
Gone at 40

Poe
London 
Kafka
Bruce
Coltrane
Lennon

mysteriously
accidental
TB OD
cancer shot
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#6
"Thats okay. It sounds like me anyway"

Head side to side, he just laid down
He wasn't bash and crash
The classiest
Always had those $1000 suits
Not really bothered
He's got about 7
Groove master
Not jaggers drummer

"Never call me your drummer again."
Peanut butter honey banana sandwiches
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#7
I’ll go with Rivernotch’s original suggestion about a mythological theme…

The Moirai loom

What is love but a longing
to live
out of our skins
oblivious to time
and the ruin it brings, the thirst to do
immortal things
never quenched.
It makes us blind
to darkness, the night
loosened Minotaur in its cave
flicking his tail. And so I was given a boon
by Aphrodite, and so I was driven
to you, who shall be mine
till the Moirai loom
us out. At first light
we sail.
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#8
What a Beauty!

Australian irony;
a freak venom

all those crocodiles cooed
all those deadly spiders wooed
all those snakes sent slinking away

hunter
accident
stingray
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