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"Drifter."

"Drifter."
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#1
01-30-2011, 10:33 PM


Boreal wind,
Three-legged
Grey-feathered bird,
Got tangled in deserted streets.
Night's snowfall.

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Are you alluding to me?
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01-31-2011, 10:13 AM
not sure why but it has an apocalyptic feel about it
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#3
01-31-2011, 06:46 PM
Hi!
I'd say you are right.
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R.Y.
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