02-11-2018, 11:44 AM
(01-31-2018, 07:46 PM)vagabond Wrote: hi river, "hineni" is a beautiful word in sound and meaning.. and personally it also reminds me of a leonard cohen song.but i want it darker
i wondered if you could write "nor is it deafness" instead of "blindness" concerning those oracular dreams.

also if i remember right that last section i recontextualized into a sort of synthesis of the first and second sections, so it begins as a response to those "two lone lights", and continues into a "foreign tongue", before finally ending in an image of both sound and [brilliant] fury, "fire-/works"
also apparently Duterte is planning to close Boracay? i don't know what to say about that -- i mean, i hated it, it was so busy, but so many people's lives actually depend on that place that i don't think that's a prudent idea

